I have read the first two chapters and was hooked from the start. Can’t wait to read the rest of the book. Congratulations on Book of the Month.
Several month’s later, I have read the full version and these are now my comments:
I first came across this novel via Goodreads. It had been chosen as a quarter finalist in Amazon’s Breakthrough Novel Award and the first two chapters were on offer. I was hooked from the start; I couldn’t wait for the full version to be published. The storyline had great potential, but being totally honest, I was so disappointed when I read it. It was repetitive, and drawn out. I found myself glossing over complete paragraphs. With editing, it could have been a much shorter story with a much bigger impact.