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A Short Story! – The Sting of Justice

This was a short story written for the Jurassic Coast Writing Group. We had to incorporate the words ‘Sting Of Justice’ in a story of no more than 1000 words.

The Sting of Justice

Old Bill Jenkins was a very contented man. His life revolved around his garden. Every morning, rain or shine, he would inspect his plants and flowers. The garden was long, narrow and sloping down away from the cottage, which made it all the more interesting. It began with a patio next to the cottage, lined with pots of all different sizes, then a couple of steps down to an immaculate lawn, surrounded by flower beds, which lead into a shrubbery and finally at the bottom an area left to go wild, with fruit trees and wild flowers. His favourites were roses and dahlias, and he would enter local flower shows and invariably win first or second prize for his roses, but the top prize for his dahlias had always eluded him. Gerald Tompkins from the bottom of the village always managed to beat him. Bill had a wall in the conservatory filled with rosettes, but never a 1st for dahlias.
Bill also loved any flowers that attracted bees. He was never sure where the bees came from, no-one around had any hives, but everyday he would look out for them, and listen to them buzzing busily about collecting pollen until they could hardly fly. He would chat to them too; you were supposed to talk to bees, it kept them happy. He would tell them things that he would never tell anyone else, including his wife Nellie. On hot summer afternoons, he and Nellie would get their garden chairs and sit on the lawn, dozing, with only the soft droning of the bees.
In July and August Bill would open his garden to visitors. Charging £2.50 each for a walk around the garden and a cup of tea and a cupcake made by Nellie. The proceeds all went to a local charity and he would make a few hundred pounds each year which he and Nellie would hand over.
The next flower competition was due the following weekend and Bill was excited. His Dahlias were in fine form, the best he had ever seen. He was sure this time he would beat Gerald Tompkins.
Friday came, the day the flowers would need to be picked and put in displays ready for the show the following day. Bill got up and without stopping for his usual cup of tea headed out into the garden. He stopped dead in his tracks and stared. Flowers were strewed all over the patio and the lawn. Dahlias, roses, in fact any flower that had been growing had been destroyed. He walked down to the bottom of the garden, trembling with shock. Even some of the bushes had been hacked about. Everything was gone. But the thing that struck him most was the silence, no bees. They knew there was nothing here for them now.
Shaking himself out of his inertia, he ran back to the house shouting for Nellie to come and look, at the same time grabbing the phone and calling the police.
The police turned up within the hour; a kindly policewoman made the shocked couple a cup of tea while the sergeant questioned them and asked if they had any idea who might have caused this terrible destruction. Bill was reluctant to say, but finally mentioned Gerald Tompkins who had guessed that Bill might beat him with his dahlias this time.
The police said they would question Mr Tompkins, but it was going to be difficult to establish who the culprit was if there were no witnesses.
The flower show took place and Gerald Tompkins took first and second prize with his Dahlias and as Bill hadn’t got any roses left to enter, Gerald took first and second prize with his roses too.
Several weeks went by. Bill gradually tidied his garden up and a few buds were beginning to appear again. The bees still hadn’t returned and Bill still felt very despondent that nobody had been arrested for the crime.
A couple more weeks went by, then Nellie, who had been shopping in the village rushed home calling to Bill.
‘You’ll never guess what? Gerald Tompkins has been attacked by a swarm of bees in his garden. He is lucky to be alive apparently, Mrs Tucker at the post office said. He was rushed to hospital covered in stings, but is making a recovery. What do you make of that?’
‘Hmm,’ said Bill, who still had his suspicions about Tompkins, although nothing had ever been proved.
That evening, as they sat in their conservatory having a cup of cocoa before bed, the doorbell rang. Wondering who on earth could be calling at this late hour; Bill opened the door to find the same police sergeant and the policewoman standing on the doorstep. They were sorry to bother Bill and Nellie, they said, but could they come in for a few minutes. Bill ushered them into the conservatory and Nellie offered them a drink which they both refused.
‘A strange business Mr Jenkins.’ The sergeant said, ‘this evening someone found a body in the ditch below Gerald Tompkins’ garden. A young man, a stranger by all accounts. This man was covered in bee stings, so many they killed him. Terrible to look at he was. We just thought you might be interested to know. The sergeant stared hard at Bill who had the slight hint of a smile on his face. ‘The sting of justice perhaps Mr Jenkins?’
The very next day, the bees returned.


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Review of Changes (The Randall Lee Mysteries #1)

Changes (The Randall Lee Mysteries #1)Changes by Charles Colyott
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

I thoroughly enjoyed this book. There was more strong language than I usually find acceptable, but the story was good enough to overcome that.

American, Randall Lee, a trained acupuncturist, is also a Tai Chi Master. Because of his understanding of the Chinese culture and able to speak the language, he is initially recruited by the police to help with interviews, by acting as a translator in a murder enquiry. A young girl has been murdered. But Lee soon gets more involved with the crime as he realises that a Tai Chi expert has used the martial art to kill. Only a master would recognise the work of another master.

Lee meets Tracy, when she makes an appointment at his shop and she becomes drawn into the action. There are more murders, and their lives are in danger. Lee uses his skills to avoid being killed.

It is fast-moving action story that keeps you engrossed from beginning to end. I look forward to reading another Randall Lee novel.

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Saturday Photo – A Mysterious Pathway

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Somewhere, in a deep, dark forest in South West Devon is this mysterious tree-lined pathway. It leads nowhere – not now anyway. Where did it lead? Could this be the beginning of a new novel for me to write?

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Review of Maggie’s Fall by Ricki Wilson

Maggie's FallMaggie’s Fall by Ricki Wilson
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

I found this to be a very easy read. It would be ideal for holidays. The story was good, if a bit predictable. Maggie, the main character was always going to end up with Witt. It was well written and the characters were strong and believable. An interesting insight into how someone in a coma is aware of surroundings and struggling to regain consciousness.

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The Friday Quote

This quote is taken from The Key by Joe Vitale. It is accredited to Karen Casey – Change Your Mind and Your Life Will Follow

Criticism is never loving, it is never shared for someone’s good. It is designed to undermine or create insecurities and doubt in the person to whom it is directed.

How apt this seems for us writers!

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Last chance to win a signed advance “collectors item” copy of The Istanbul Puzzle +news

Last chance to win a signed advance "collectors item" copy of The Istanbul Puzzle +news.

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Saturday Photo – Ferns

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A beautiful ‘cool’ photo for a hot Saturday. I always find ferns relaxing and peaceful, with their fronds waving gently in the breeze. This photo of ferns was taken at Abbotsbury Tropical Gardens in Dorset. It is world famous for it’s Camellia groves and magnolias, also for its splendid collections of Rhododendron and Hydrangea collections. And when you have had your fill of plants, shrubs and trees, make your way to the Colonnial Restaurant and have your fill of cakes and cups of tea!

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